"It's REAL. And it stays"? Creepy, he knows something, right? I'm more scared of him than of the doctor. Besides, I already decided. Serge is the real evil mastermind behind anything that might happen. Only the ending(when it arrives) might change my mind.
It's because i've never met anyone quite so nice, and besides, he's CUTE! Cute guys always have a dark side. Sorry, i have a thing for chivalry, and Dark side, well, ASIDE, Serge looks like a perfect gentleman... I'm so whipped for your fictional character it's not even funny. You are secretly evil. Admit it. This is all an elaborate plot so fans will fall for the characters and you shall rule the world. On another not, I think I would be good friends with Elly, my mind puts me in fictional tight spots sometimes, i know how she feels At any rate I'm loving your comic, especially since I can relate to Elly...
ah in photoshop, you need to make a new layer. then double click on it, so the advanced blending options show, and on the bottom you have an option called "stroke". check that one. you can also change color of your stroke there as well as thickness. then you take a selection tool and make a circle and fill it wiht the desired color for your speech bubble. and voila- its done. [link]
Ah, I just read a bunch of this in a short amount of time and I have to say I regret not coming across it earlier. It's a beautifully paced comic and the art is satisfying. Character expressions are the key to my love and you do them brilliantly. I hope you don't mind me pointing this out but I think in the previous comic page as well as this one you've written "a lot" as one word. I'm curious about how Elly's sister sounds out loud. She doesn't seem to be a fan of contractions and it's really interesting, gives her a quirky quality
yeah.. im good with pacing, but im not very good at dialogues. i like both writing and drawing, but i never took any literacy courses XD if this thing ever gets published ill prolly have an actuall writer fix my dialogs.
My wife says that she now hates you. She read this a few days ago, and today shuddered, telling me that she cannot stop thinking about the sound of a rusty tin can being polished with sandpaper, with her hair standing on end.
I'm glad I'm not the only one to notice that - I just did an image search for ear clip earrings, and there are some interesting designs available, mainly spirals and dragons, though I didn't see anything as straightforward as Elly's choice.